TSLB3252 CREATIVE WRITING : POETRY

A Path To Divine Success

I looked back on my school filled days
I now agnize how much it pays
It leads to the path of prosperity
And it gives us a sounding security.

Life will teach you many things
Ups and downs and many swings
But the learning that I got at school
Has made me stand up on my own toes.

So learn all you can while you're in school
Don't worry about being so cool.
Stick to the fight when you're hardest hit.
Rest if you must, but don't you quit.








Comments

  1. Littledec28 February 2023 at 18:50

    So talented, you should write a book!

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  2. Syazwan28 February 2023 at 19:13

    This poem beautifully captures the struggles and triumphs of academic life, and offers a wise reminder to persevere even in the face of difficulty :'(

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    1. Hidayah Abdul Aziz1 March 2023 at 00:06

      You read it so well :) Glad you understand the message!

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  3. Anonymous28 February 2023 at 20:57

    • Exceptionally multiple postings on same topic contribute to the flow of conversation.

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  4. Rinana28 February 2023 at 22:11

    Very inspiring! Very creative use of vocabulary words!!👍

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  5. Jannah28 February 2023 at 22:33

    Great one hidayah!!

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  6. bobameow28 February 2023 at 22:47

    Amazing poetry! you should published a book!

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    1. Hidayah Abdul Aziz1 March 2023 at 00:10

      Thank you! There's still a lot to improve. I'll think about it :D

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  7. HadaMelon28 February 2023 at 22:48

    Such a good writing, I hope it is longer. Good job!!

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  8. Alisya Othman28 February 2023 at 23:07

    Inspiring poetry.. keep writing

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  9. ♡ Nurizzah Nabihah ♡28 February 2023 at 23:12

    You should consider to write more poem as it's very immaculate!

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  10. mecdach1 March 2023 at 02:00

    Creatively talented, write more chuseyo

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  11. MiSoap1 March 2023 at 05:21

    Wow, your poem sounds great

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